When Life Began to Dance

When life began to dance and tell the names of me and you
Heaven was met at the threshold of blessings
A waterfall of souls beat an eternal tune that was given
On the beautiful eve of our love’s confession

A seed began growing as a reminder of passion’s flame
Thankful incense smiled, quietly burned
Our line of sight passed into a mist filled with love
Few have ever felt, but for, deeply yearn

Into the air shapes of thought became as tender voices
Deeply settling into our hearts forevermore
They whispered into the dance of life with a pleasure
That sweetly opened the reasons we are for

Whirls of wonder welcomed a constant round of forever
The stars knew our hands must be joined
And we were led to sing the verses of a lovely song
A melody, only heaven could have coined

Reviews

[☯]

A romantic and passionate piece.
"A waterfall of souls beat an eternal tune that was given
On the beautiful eve of our love’s confession"
I really liked the sing-song type of feel it gave and the soothe flow. The title says it all. Amazing write :)

[realmwriter]

Exquisitely written piece Neva. Your a true bleeding heart romantic

[realmwriter]

A bleeding heart romantic after all... Very elegantly written

[LetMeLaughLetMeSing]

So fantastical... :) this is a great write!

[BlackCl0ud]

"The stars knew our hands must be joined" the perfect symbol of a destined love. "Few have ever felt, but for, deeply yearn" the words that describe an emotion we all have felt and feel, a desire for something more.

[VelvetRosetta]

Intense beauty eases from this writing! Lovley Neva!

[Jeremy Baker]

This is lovely - wow! I'd love to ever be the recipient of a poem like this - just sublime!

[FallenWingz]

i love this, sensual and romantic..ever since i came here i am indulging myself into sultry poetry...anotehr amazing piece.

[Bridgid Persephone Newm..]

Surf that spiral! I love it!

[WatashLegend]

If heaven ever learned to love from a poem it was this poem here that it learned from, great write

[Kenneth The Poet]

This reminds me of a biblical love poem. Great work indeed.