I Only Shine Within His Shadow

By shade he lives under a pond of glass

Shallow memories sigh in the night

A glistening body of crystallized laughter

A new man, purified by light

On some occasions, he will wear a face

With a smile that twists to the East

‘Cause his thoughts are misunderstood

His eyes dance like his feet

Sadly, there is no proof known of his birth

The chapters are frozen in time

Yet, like a tall ship, he blazes a path

In the moonlight of my mind

He is handsome my memory writes out loud

Since I was small, I knew his name

I am only able to shine within his shadow

Yet, I love him all the same

Author's Note

Having a little fun for a change...........:) XX

Reviews

[Maya Storm]

It seemed as if you were speaking of a metaphysical being. Funny how... "He is handsome my memory writes out loud" The mind usually makes things better than they are reality :). I am glad that I had the chance to read this, it's inspiring. Thank you.

[Audrey Howitt]

Lighthearted side? Even here, you create a realm for us to see your vision. Brava!

[Tom Benson]

It was hard to tell at first reading if this was tongue in cheek or total devotion. It comes across as a light-hearted piece, but is entertaining however it's taken.

[Muse]

It's the fun that makes this so charming. xo

[☯]

A very fun and ancient type of read. I felt the person you were describing materialize right before my eyes. A stunning and lovely write. :)

[E.V. Black]

And what fun you had. :D
I loved this! It was so sweet.

[WordNerd]

AMAZING, great imagery =]

[unknown]

Usually the best people are the ones we create in our dreams :) lovely poem.

[silentpoet]

now that was truly amazing..

[Larry Dyson]

Excellent flow and movement...feelings of Darkness but not malevalence..