Fault Found Without Mention

Lost in reasons I spoke without thinking, sometimes we cannot see

Those waves we want to believe, for darkness all around

Corners of the universe are not known at birth

And the world refuses to give up space

For all your name surrounds

Maybe if we just sighed for one second instead of crying for a new life

What seems to be disabling could remake the bed we made

I thought I was painting a heaven into our world 

One that could hold away every hurt

At least make bruises fade

Inside of shells we stand on hills and look up to the heavens above

Wondering if our destiny ripples as each day breaks anew

Yet we love just the same despite the inevitability

That suddenly shouts from every doorway

We afforded to walk through

Lost in reasons I spoke without thinking, sometimes we cannot see

The battles that laugh nervously for a bit of our attention

Corners of the universe are not known at birth

Yet the stars in our eyes can be infinite

In fault found without mention

Reviews

[Veronica Chandler]

Wow, this is such a soulful poem which oozes with hopfulness and light. The lines, "Maybe if we just sighed for one second instead of crying for a new life
What seems to be disabling could remake the bed we made", medicine for my soul, and, "Corners of the universe are not known at birth Yet the stars in our eyes can be infinite", fills me with hope. Inspiring poem!

[realmwriter]

Reading your words is like reading the sky, sailing on wind, the way we fly. It's a peice of joy and happiness inside, that waits to be let out by gentle words...

[Time.]

This poem has a feeling of it's on I love this part, "Lost In reason I spoke without thinking." amazing write.

[LetMeLaughLetMeSing]

This is so beautiful...! Sorry it took so long to review it, i've been gone for a while.

[VelvetRosetta]

Stunningly wonderful Neva...Love it

[WatashLegend]

emotion pours in this piece an all you can eat buffet, delicious.

[Liza]

heart warming as the longing to continue painting love without the mysteries and fears of the corners of the universe. experiences, pain and knowledge gained are resistances of the heart and it is very vivid in this emotionally intelligent piece.

[Jibin]

Its a good work dear friend. I always wonder how beautifully you sketch up every stanza, and the whole work, with such an awesome flow.! You are just an amazing writer, now i becomes a great fan of you.
:)

[Audrey Howitt]

Such a beautiful write Neva. I sometimes wonder whether it is worth may saying that to you again and again, and yet, you continue to take my breath away, so how can I not honor you the way you honor us? Thank you!

[OT]

I love that picture! and this poem! the idea of things in teh corners of the universe - the colours and things unseen - but all are there - the stars can be infinite if you wish them to be - or you can place limits on your vision - love the third stanza - the notion of standing inside the shell!! bravo!! a brilliant piece!

[Tom Benson]

The general undercurrent of this piece for me is full of hope and positivity and there is plenty of room in this world for that. Insightful writing my friend.