Tenderly Marked Thoughts

Tenderly Marked Thoughts

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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These inventive fingers would surely leave this earth..............

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Bewitching ripples of time pass as I write letters to you
To hang as something beautiful on your walls
Tenderly I mark them with wind that bares my soul
Leaving my presence to stir across your sky
As a shield from rains that fall

Enthralling words to hold forever within your breast
I leave for you as bits of my gentle peace
Lying open on your walls, the richness of my joy
Is left to fall as silver leaves of warmth
Cover cold that will not cease

These inventive fingers would surely leave this earth 
An epic journey they would move to make
To find the words to chase away those hellions
That exist here in this world of chaos
Your peaceful grace to take

When you pass by these letters I have written for you
They will caress you with the echo of my soul
Sweet peace you yearn for, is always here to see
In these thoughts I have tenderly marked
For your own heart to hold

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Written for the Creative Poetry Group using the words: bewitching, enthralling, inventive, silver, hellion and epic. Fun! Fun!

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Once again, very creative. I loved how you made simple letters seem more than just that. Words have a power all their own, no matter what anyone else says. You made that statement true by weaving your magic into it. Such lyrical imagery and writing, Neva. Again, I applaud you. Bravo!

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You write superbly. I love the romantic imagery.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This is stunningly beautiful! I loved, loved loved it!
"In these thoughts I have tenderly marked for your heart to hold"
Brilliant!

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Tags: poetry, bewitching, enthralling, inventive, silver, hellion, epic

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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