Sealed In the Smoothness of You

Sealed In the Smoothness of You

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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there has been no telling If my other half gave a damn.............

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Would I be saved by the passing of my trembling hands

Over the tears that fall from my skies
If my pleasure was sealed in the smoothness of you
If all of my vanishing light began flashing
Like a trail of shooting stars
Could I see the miracle
Known as the truth

If you descended from where I have walked on fire
Where fear does not torment or stain
Would I know you have come to fill all the holes
That now dwell inside of my secret soul
The ones held closed by my fingers
To keep from spilling feelings
Not to be named

In these hours my eyes have stared with intensity
Strong as the air I live and breathe
They have been lined by time with all that I am
One-half of me can recognize myself
And there has been no telling
If my other half……..
Gave a damn

Now everything has faded into pieces of a puzzle
Creating a picture known as truth
I sit still and wonder where each piece fits
Inside the half of me I can recognize
That would walk on fire to feel
My pleasure sealed
In the smoothness of you

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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I love this and the sentiment that reminds me of a golden light casr by candle and the thoughts that pour into a classic moment of beauty, when the heart
expresses it's ever sense of poetic feeling, your words are overflowing with
care and anticipation, remarkable job on this Neva :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This lovely piece has a wonderful flow just rolling softly as each wave of thought trails off. Reading this trasported me to another place, a dreamy sort of soft warm breeze of a feeling wafted by.
So intensly thought provoking

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As only Neva can, another excellent write that eases my flued up head :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gave me a calm and serene feeling..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this and the sentiment that reminds me of a golden light casr by candle and the thoughts that pour into a classic moment of beauty, when the heart
expresses it's ever sense of poetic feeling, your words are overflowing with
care and anticipation, remarkable job on this Neva :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a great poem. It flows so smoothly.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent poem. I really like this one as a whole. nice even flow and comfortable feel here.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautifully expressed and masterfully penned. exquisite write, neva!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was great can relate to this a lot !!:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful insight to the struggles
within us all. Some for better and
some for worse, a lesson in this write
to be learned. Exquisite work Neva.


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

In order to have a happy future we must come to terms with mistakes of the past and remember we are human. No one else can save you from the demons.
You really have a way with words.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 28, 2011
Last Updated on June 14, 2011
Tags: poetry, puzzle, fire, fingers, soul, hands, tears, skies

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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