Fill My Soul Delighted

Fill My Soul Delighted

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Dearest desire, light of my darkness, fill my soul delighted..........

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Better than purposely it seems attracting

All that filled my soul delighted
Before you danced in tracks of beauty
Our hearts were not meant to be divided

In sleep itself we are great trees of splendor
Silver hands that wake to see
Flowers bring what is born unto flame
Rest on laurels of you and me

If this comes from butterflies of time
To softly rest upon our lips
Should we not place your hand in mine
And round this cup both sip

I find that I am empty but I must endure
Pass this test of time
Until my streams are filled once again
Your heart is tied to mine

Dearest desire, light of my darkness
Fill my soul delighted
Come and sip this cup with me…’tis full
When we are not divided

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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Neva, This was just exquisite, but then again everything you write is. But one speaks volumes upon volumes. " Dearest desire, light of my darkness fill my soul delighted. Come and sip this cup with me...tis full, When we are not divided" These words can speak to everyone in a different way depending on how they want to interpet it. Love it, it is a favorite. xo

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what a lovely romantic write. you definitely have a knack for writing in this genre.
outstanding job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Desire is something we strongly miss when we do not have it. It makes us shine from inside out. I love the last stanza it sums up the feelings in this poem quite well and the imagery of sipping from the same cup is stunning.

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Another amazing poem that is going into my favorites.

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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