Pearls Whisper In the Crevices of My Soul

My center has been caught underneath that which will never let go
Of pearls that sigh and whisper in the crevices of my soul
Although the darkest of creatures call out my name
I am not unconsciously held on their horizons
Nor will I ever breathe the same

Distraction returns as a sad mistake within a facade of goodness
Staring at me with intentions of pacing the words I weave
In hopes that I will abandon my art to dark lands
Without seeing the dust there on his book
Or pages not touched by his hand

I will continue to fight for these pearls and hold my own beliefs
Stay centered without distraction of dark philosophies
Although night may fall upon the day conceived
I will not be held on anyone’s horizon
Or of my pearls be relieved

Reviews

[Art]

an expression of your self identity Neva...one must always stay within their center and beliefs...to many are lead into those dark realities...so few can comprehend the strive to stay within the Light...just like those pearls of yours...such is your voice...

[WatashLegend]

tremendous flow and well expressed in this write gracefulness dominates the reader, well done

[☯]

"Although night may fall upon the day conceived
I will not be held on anyone’s horizon"

A beautifully written and composed piece of writing. A thoughtful and magical piece. :)

[Clay Feet]

Elegant eloquent exposition
Iridescent beauty
Glow grow
Strand of pearls
Precious center
Heart beam wisdom
Strength defy transparent
Sigh whisper light
Talisman of truth
Fend dark horizon
Sing freedom

[JohnEWordSlinger]

This is tough, I really like this one also, thank you much appreciated, WS

[∂αʌ<..]

you amaze me everytime!

[Richard Beard]

I had to read this about 6 times. Usually a good sign when it comes to poetry. So, it's not soemthing that is easily absorbed. That's a compliment.

Your work engaged me. This is your therapy. Always turn to it and fight for those pearls.

[Ladysue]

how I loved those last lines...a very strong ending with conviction...love the use of pearls here too...this was exceptional in flow and content...a great voice...

Another tortured and yet revealing poem. Struggling to maintain the belief in the self. I like the use of pearls here especially.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A study of ones self, a clear and pointed message in wording, well done