All my secrets lie in Greece, where my gaze rests on soulful eyes.................
All my secrets lie in Greece, where my gaze rests on soulful eyes Although time changes what we carry inside our hearts The vines of me are hidden inside my best friend Where the waters of her gestures Grace my soul
In life our days are set to share with someone whom we trust Denied I am sure is this to many under the same sky With gentle speech, my friend holds me close Her heartbeat sending tones of relief To my own
Feelings come to me as portraits that light all of my darkness As if my dear friend reads the very mind of my heart Letting me always know that I am never alone She is shedding a thousand tears for me Even miles apart
All my secrets lie in Greece, where my gaze rests on Retrit’s eyes Although time has changed me in ways I cannot deny The vines of my heart are entwined forever With the friend who holds my hand Soothes my soul
This one sings to me Neva; it sings like a lullaby. I have a best friend who is far away but always near me in my heart. You words, "Feelings come to me as portraits that light all of my darkness As if my dear friend reads the very mind of my heart Letting me always know that I am never alone", are simply stirring and moved me to tears, our true friends are gifts and treasures. I adore this one.
This is nice.....distance can never really come in-between relationships unless you decide to make way. I really liked this for the honest emotions in it.
"Feelings come to me as portraits that light all of my darkness" deeply reaching inside me to some tender(hard to reach) part. Soul stirring and kind. A wonderful ode to friendship. ~ BlackCl0ud
Such a heartwarming and descriptive write. A strong poem dedicated to an important and loved friend. I really think the plot of the poem, which is Greece is a magical and lovely place. An amazing write. Stunning job :)
A very true and meaningful poem. It's hard to express just how much someone means to you, especially when you are trying to make it a poem. However, I think you nailed it. It's beautiful.
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