Running Wild

I gathered waves of laughter and began to run wild
With horses who came to see the sun
Although my footsteps were soft and sweet
The earth still saw my soul
Started spinning wild
  Gathering waves of laughter
Along with me

Reviews

[Pebbles]

This is the shortist poem i have ever read of yours Neva, but it still holds the magic within its frame ...... brilliant my friend x x sorry not been about much getting used to new job and been searching for resourses to help me do a better job ... but i love it and im happy x

[Rediscovery]

I love it Neva, especially since you incorporated horses into it. Great job again, you never fail to amaze me.

[Audrey Howitt]

Although my footsteps were soft and sweet, the earth still saw my soul--Loved this part especially. Lovely write in such a short span of words!