Running Wild

I gathered waves of laughter and began to run wild
With horses who came to see the sun
Although my footsteps were soft and sweet
The earth still saw my soul
Started spinning wild
  Gathering waves of laughter
Along with me

Reviews

[Pebbles]

This is the shortist poem i have ever read of yours Neva, but it still holds the magic within its frame ...... brilliant my friend x x sorry not been about much getting used to new job and been searching for resourses to help me do a better job ... but i love it and im happy x

[Hayley]

I feel so free in this one. The picture is perfect for the poem! As usual. I think it is short but full of meaning. I reallly like the "footsteps were soft and sweet"
Fantastic poem!

[BlackCl0ud]

Ah, sweet freedom, and then for that to be accepted by the world and encouraged . . . a dream.

[Veronica Chandler]

To speak so much in so few words is a beautiful thing! This poem is absolutely delightful, thoughtful and inspired! I enjoyed the poem and the image very much; together they compliment eachother and add a vibrant energy.

[Alicia Hirshey]

I agree. I think This is the shortest thing i have ever read that you have wrote. But it was beautiful.

[Lily Mae]

I love the feeling of freedom..being set free and loving the moment:) xx Beautiful.xxx

[unknown]

It's great to have the wild side. You'll be well rounded. Innocence with a hint of sweetness and thrilling pleasures. Great poem :)

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Neva what a beautiful short piece for you. With the photo you included it makes it sound as if you are a photgrapher holding breathe at the wonderous site she has so blessed to see. Well at least that's what I precieved. xoxo I loved it!!!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

enigmatic and resounding, a tearful piece, well done

[brenda]

i love this poem hopw it tells about freedom mixed with happiness i love this!:)