Running Wild

I gathered waves of laughter and began to run wild
With horses who came to see the sun
Although my footsteps were soft and sweet
The earth still saw my soul
Started spinning wild
  Gathering waves of laughter
Along with me

Reviews

[Pebbles]

This is the shortist poem i have ever read of yours Neva, but it still holds the magic within its frame ...... brilliant my friend x x sorry not been about much getting used to new job and been searching for resourses to help me do a better job ... but i love it and im happy x

[kdpgrahi]

First time I see such a short poem from you. Generally you write at least four stanzas. It is short but meaningful and tells the whole story better. I like your style here.

[☯]

A short and sweet poem. The imagery and bright wording made it something to devour slowly. Amazing job :)

[al25]

Really like the image I have in my head right now after reading your peom. Really well written.

[light and ashes]

Such a small amount of words, but great all the same. Thank you for sharing.

[Ladysue]

oh I love this...it feels like freedom...alive and living...this was fantastic work...

[Samuel Dickens]

We've seen dogs, horses and other animals run, jump and frolic about, just insanely happy to feel their muscles and bones moving inside their skin, to be alive, and it's such a positive, uplifting thing to see. To me, that is what you've described here. When you think about it, people can do this too.

A fun and lighthearted piece. Very nice.

[Joel M Frye]

Really like the image of the world laughing along with your high-spirited romp. Enjoyed this light-hearted short, Neva.

[Sylo's Rose]

this is very nice i love the way you said with horses who came to see the sun and although my footsteps were soft and sweet the earth stil saw my soul. it's like your sayin the horses them selves loked into your soul and told the tale you did not know was there

[Jibin]

Nice, quiet short though it is interesting and thoughtful write.