Dreams of Unknown Melodies

Dreams of unknown melodies become my companions
When the moon sits upon her throne, my love
Far away, more gravitating
Are the quivering stars in the heavens
Up above

My life floats within the sun in a blissful perfect peace
Blazing there, high above the tallest trees
In lines, my soul can name
Running ceaseless and as fair as fair
Can be

Within all the perfect strength I find from these two
There lies this land, where breezes blow
To chase away the fog
That softly creeps across my heart
With woe

The cares of life are swept away in unknown melodies
Into that place known as wilderness, of sound
My eyes are turned to touch
Upon their ancient realms of hope
Once again……….
My world is spinning round

Author's Note

Reviews

[Veronica Chandler]

Oh my goodness, I glanced at the stats on this piece and see a number which surprises. I guess by the number, 1046 views, I am not your only big fan. I am as amazed at the number as I am at how you are able to capture light and mist and the realms of hope. With the words, "My life floats within the sun in a blissful perfect peace Blazing there, high above the tallest trees", I find myself looking up to warm my face seeking peace in the tallest trees.
Beautiful write.

[Dream Weaver]

You have to know I Love the pic...
Great title for this lovely melodic
piece, Nice very nice Neva xx

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Such a wonderful, but sad write.
So nicely written.

[Ladysue]

Exquisite and a new favorite...love your phrasing and those last two verses are stunning...your images just shine and inspire...beautifully done..

[☯]

I love the flow in this poem, and the themes you set out for each and every one of your poems. You handle them with such delicacy and power. I also like the magical feel of this and the way you speak to us. I especially liked the lines:
"My life floats within the sun in a blissful perfect peace
Blazing there, high above the tallest trees"
Amazing write :)

[brenda]

this is super good i know a person who can relate to this in so many ways beautigul neva !!!:)

[fargone]

beautiful and kind of melancholy. ur work never disappoints, neva. exellent :)

[joshua deathdealer]

The imagery of day and night is just spectacular in this piece. I could in vision the whole read which is pretty rare. Usually in most reads I lose the projection in the first couple of lines because of no follow through. Beautiful. When the moon sits upon her throne.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This was beautifully composed. No flaws, as this flowed liike unknown melodies. Wonderfful!

[VelvetRosetta]

Awesomely beautiful...and the image is just perfect for this piece.

[lorilynn]

hiya neva; where ever you are they i go and so here i am, ta da)) lovely write, wonderful imagery and beautifully penned!!