Within Forms of Silent Time

In the blossoming winds of life we are scattered
Within forms of silent time
On all those nights where love
Is more than flesh that holds our will
And the foundation we build
Is yours and mine

Defeat is a precarious lantern who’s light
Is bitterly bright and unfair
Yet nothing can spring from rivers
That I call mine that could ever
Make me forsake you
To go there

Discontent will never be mine to hold
As I know that you understand
These words I carve
From my heart
Because my spirit is at
Your command

You are the morning that quenches my thirst
My fragrance after the rain
Now how could I ever forget you
Or these sighs you have left
As here in my heart
They remain

Reviews

[Clay Feet]

In daylight will I realign my mind
And refine the lift in these lines
That tonight I do not see
For sadness keeps me

'Tis beauty seen in silence
Built on philosophers stone
More than flesh and bone
But tonight my soul doth moan

Moonlight bright on still waters
Beams fond memory of yesternights
Long lost a thousand years is but a day
Swallowed light in nights decay

Strong-willed smithstress heart in hand
Sings song of love to other than
One lone heart longing
On bleak silent shore

Drink thee fragrant spirit of morn
Taste again sweet rain remembered
'Twill not soothe my spirit sore
Till tomorrow my heart restore
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Your loving heart penetrates deeply.
Your transcendent thoughts
Wonderfully extend to your intended sphere.
Beautiful writing.

[BlackCl0ud]

"You are the morning that quenches my thirst . . . "
As if darkness is your starvation and love is your salavation. How could you ever forget the one you love so dear, perhaps loosing him his your one true fear. Nothing lacks in these rhymes, the imagery is sublime. ~ BlackCl0ud

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This is so wonderful and ever so beuatiful.
Amazing flow.

[Fairytale]

This poem flows nicely. I like the way you use your words. This poem seems to show more than describe. Very effective.

[unknown]

Hearing the love through silence is always a great thing. Beautiful poem :)

[Dream Weaver]

Such pleasantries playing beautiful beats
upon heartstrings. Excellent flow Gorgeous
write Neva...

[Aidz]

Melodic in purpose and structure, seranading me again Neva

[Lily Mae]

"You are the morning that quenches my thirst
My fragrance after the rain"... My favorite line:) Not only do your poems touch your readers, but the photos you use are always right on. I always know I'm in for a treat:) xx

[Art]

you leave us within the depth of your thoughts...

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

enraptured heart rapture~what a beautiful melody comprises a beautiful soul who emerges pure and filled with light out of every happenstance~