Keystone

If I asked you what you see in me
Would those rivers
Flow the same
A vessel for to hold the sea
Or a levee for to claim

Would you see walls you can absolve
A tree with no leaves
A riddle
No man could ever solve
Or a truth you can believe

Tell me true, what you can see
When your sky
Is not blue
A web interlacing what cannot be
Or one that ties my heart to you

Would you tell me you celebrate the jewel
You've found
For a kingdom of your own
Kept as a keystone
To create a harmonious sound
You cannot compose on your own

Reviews

[Clay Feet]

Neva,

You find me late at night when the concerns of the day have become added to my reflecting pool. My sky is not blue.

If I were a romantic sort with powers to write poetically, I would tell you in flowery verse how beautiful this is. I would tell you that it brings tears to my eyes because it seems as though it was written specifically for me.

At various places I want to interject with a "Yes" or "No" it moves me so.

How I wish I could write like this.

[brenda]

this is so breathtaking i liked it!!!

[Jibin]

Interesting, i love the flow....
:)

[Skateprincess]

Great job with this, it's flow is beautiful.

[Layla J Omorose]

another one that I loved...great job

[Kyla H]

I love your wording, your poetry has a certain feel to it that I can't completely wrap my head around. I like it.(:

[felioness]

Love... always a delight to read...so very hard to find the true variety!

[unknown]

I am waiting for someone to find my keys too, it's unlocked and waiting. Lovely poem Neva !

[Derek S.Keck]

Your poetry has such a beautiful mystical quality to it. You write from the sacred oblivions of love.

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harmonious sounds indeed..a descriptive and eloquent piece

[.........]

Wow, another amazing poem. Where do you get these beautiful pictures?