Keystone
A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
A vessel for to hold the sea or a levee for to claim..........
If I asked you what you see in me Would those rivers Flow the same A vessel for to hold the sea Or a levee for to claim
Would you see walls you can absolve A tree with no leaves A riddle No man could ever solve Or a truth you can believe
Tell me true, what you can see When your sky Is not blue A web interlacing what cannot be Or one that ties my heart to you
Would you tell me you celebrate the jewel You've found For a kingdom of your own Kept as a keystone To create a harmonious sound You cannot compose on your own
© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Neva,
You find me late at night when the concerns of the day have become added to my reflecting pool. My sky is not blue.
If I were a romantic sort with powers to write poetically, I would tell you in flowery verse how beautiful this is. I would tell you that it brings tears to my eyes because it seems as though it was written specifically for me.
At various places I want to interject with a "Yes" or "No" it moves me so.
How I wish I could write like this.
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1628 Views
38 Reviews
Shelved in 2 Libraries
Added on May 6, 2011
Last Updated on December 15, 2011
Tags: rivers, sea, levee, walls, riddle
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Neva Flores Smith - ChangefulstormGA
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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia.
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My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon
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