Acceptance Is a Difficult Thought

Acceptance Is a Difficult Thought

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Fact is, there are times I yield to emotion.........

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In all of the directions of what you want to tell me

Comes anything that looks better in motion
Although I am torn by the reasons
I try hard to project
Fact is, there are moments I yield to emotion

I can relax out of earshot of any kind of danger
That does not scatter or burn anyone else
Yet I am not meaning to remember
Why all the hours acknowledge
What I don’t know, ‘cause I won’t tell myself

Acceptance, my sweetheart is a difficult thought
Believe me; I know what has to be done
While held under the watchful eye
Of the hand tightly holding
Love’s gun

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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"Believe me; I know what has to be done While held under the watchful eye Of the hand tightly holding Love's gun." It's like you know exactly what you should do, exactly what needs to happen, and you are coming to terms with the fact that you cannot be ignorant to the fact that you MUST move forward. I think many of us feel this way sometimes, but we don't always want to believe it. I'm glad you wrote this, because there is a small part of myself that I saw in this poem.

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yes, put the safety on. Lovely as usual.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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so true; so so so true!!!!
love is like a gun; shoot and aim - some wear bullet proof vests ~

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Oh wow,"I can relax out of earshot of any kind of danger than does not scatter or burn anyone else" and "Of the hand tightly holiding Love's gun" So well written and beautifuly sang into the ethers. You slay me with insight!
The images add so much
Thank you

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Truly nice work with deepest thoughts.
I like the last stanza...
:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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"while held under the watchful eye
of the hand tightly holding
love's gun" - a russian roulette of feelings - yielding to something like that is indeed a difficult thought...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

No truer words have ever been spoken or in this
case written, Loved the depth and detail here!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

seriously when i sometimes ponder on many things around , and being from India .....i can relate to this write ....i would like to take a social aspect to this write ........

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Believe me; I know what has to be done While held under the watchful eye Of the hand tightly holding Love's gun." It's like you know exactly what you should do, exactly what needs to happen, and you are coming to terms with the fact that you cannot be ignorant to the fact that you MUST move forward. I think many of us feel this way sometimes, but we don't always want to believe it. I'm glad you wrote this, because there is a small part of myself that I saw in this poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I REALLY loved this. So much to say, and said it perfectly. Really held my attention. Great write. -S...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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