Breathe Upon These Miles

Softly breathe upon these miles between you and I
Where they will not continue to seem so far
Let them fall by the wayside
So that I am able to look into your eyes
No matter where we are

I cannot help but wish to be cradled in your hours
To be ever listening to your heartbeat
A sound quieting my own
Filling my world with precious showers
'Tis when I feel complete

Until the moment comes when you softly breathe
Upon these miles between you and me
Here I will be, by the wayside
Until your breath shows the way that leads
To erase all these miles I see

Softly breathe upon these miles between you and I
Until they no longer continue to exist
Let them fall by the wayside
So that I am able to look into your eyes
And be cradled in your kiss

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

I can't wait to show my dearest friend this poem.. Miles separate us and yet I feel like we've been the dearest of friends for a lifetime.. You again have penned this longing, want and need for the distance to vanish..into each others embrace:) xx Love it..x

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I adore it, there is something very arabesque about it, well done

[Alicia Hirshey]

i love this. It is lovely. It painted a perfect image into my head of love.

[brenda]

aaaw:)such a lovely poem:)