Breathe Upon These Miles

Softly breathe upon these miles between you and I
Where they will not continue to seem so far
Let them fall by the wayside
So that I am able to look into your eyes
No matter where we are

I cannot help but wish to be cradled in your hours
To be ever listening to your heartbeat
A sound quieting my own
Filling my world with precious showers
'Tis when I feel complete

Until the moment comes when you softly breathe
Upon these miles between you and me
Here I will be, by the wayside
Until your breath shows the way that leads
To erase all these miles I see

Softly breathe upon these miles between you and I
Until they no longer continue to exist
Let them fall by the wayside
So that I am able to look into your eyes
And be cradled in your kiss

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

I can't wait to show my dearest friend this poem.. Miles separate us and yet I feel like we've been the dearest of friends for a lifetime.. You again have penned this longing, want and need for the distance to vanish..into each others embrace:) xx Love it..x

[Rediscovery]

Awww! I love it! I adore the message of the speaker wanting to go back to his/her lover as they are miles away. You did another great job Neva!

[Ladysue]

you write with the utmost beauty...every line sings with wonderful phrases that capture the emotion and lets it breathe...this is stunningly beautiful...

[Robin]

delicate sentiment traversing time and distance .

[Allen Smuckler]

You write so beautifully....I was going to comment on two lines...but before I read your wonderful poem for the third time...I saw you already did..."I cannot help but wish to be cradled in your hours"....What.........a...........line....I didn't think you could top that in this poem until..."and be cradled in your kiss"...
Neva, WOW!
allen :))

[Letemdangle]

Loved it. Played like music.

[LA Lorena]

I'm smiling at this perfectly timed write! Distance does not preclude emotion and feeling.

[Omar Fendri]

How precious and assuaging is this breath. Hope it will blow in your own pretty soon. I like the way your words flow and the repetition of "Softly breathe ..." is not boring which is good for sure :)

[Aidz]

Yes another supurb scribe my friend

[Art Sun]

you just breathe those words so beautifully Neva...how can we not enjoy your work..exceptional work...