Eyes That Have Loved You Forever

Eyes That Have Loved You Forever

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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I am a wandering ghost with eyes that have loved you forever...........

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I am a wandering ghost with eyes that have loved you forever

And always greeted you with the softest smile
When you sleep tight my love I will gaze into your thoughts
Place my shadow inside of your heart
To rest for awhile

I will never bruise the wild freedom of your lovely dreams
While you lie there so tenderly in your bed
Nor will I ever break into the bright light of your day
But I will drink from the cup of your love
With these eyes instead

I am a wandering ghost with a heart you have held forever
And always owned with your paper and pen
If you close your eyes you can see my face in the vision
You created from the shadow
I left deep within

In the hours before the sunlight touches upon your breath
I will slip beneath your sighs once again
As the wandering ghost with eyes that loved you forever
And I will dance in the shadows for you only
To remember with your pen

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
A Muse perhaps...........you decide........

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"When you sleep tight my love I will gaze into your thoughts
Place my shadow inside of your heart
To rest for awhile"


The pefect place to rest and to catch a moment of peace....

Deep breath.... and relax.... That is what this wonderful poem has granted me...

Serenity :-)

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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A beautiful poetic vignette of inspiration.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A magical reverie written to perfection.
Gorgeous imagery!


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have no words...excellent just doesn't do it for this one.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful write neva,
nice rhyme cadence also!

Posted 13 Years Ago


ummmmmm....such heavenly thoughts, divine feelings and soft images... you captivate me ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hallowing. Beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The heart that held the shadow
bleeds ink into the pen that remembers,
held by the hand that grasped
at dreams, guided by the mind
haunted by words whispered
in the dark of the morning.

I've decided....

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The eyes that have loved you forever and shadows.. well I'm in.. :) Beautiful xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A succulent scribe and the last stanza truly beautiful

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful poem, Neva!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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