Eyes That Have Loved You Forever

I am a wandering ghost with eyes that have loved you forever
And always greeted you with the softest smile
When you sleep tight my love I will gaze into your thoughts
Place my shadow inside of your heart
To rest for awhile

I will never bruise the wild freedom of your lovely dreams
While you lie there so tenderly in your bed
Nor will I ever break into the bright light of your day
But I will drink from the cup of your love
With these eyes instead

I am a wandering ghost with a heart you have held forever
And always owned with your paper and pen
If you close your eyes you can see my face in the vision
You created from the shadow
I left deep within

In the hours before the sunlight touches upon your breath
I will slip beneath your sighs once again
As the wandering ghost with eyes that loved you forever
And I will dance in the shadows for you only
To remember with your pen

Author's Note

A Muse perhaps...........you decide........

Reviews

[Helen]

"When you sleep tight my love I will gaze into your thoughts
Place my shadow inside of your heart
To rest for awhile"


The pefect place to rest and to catch a moment of peace....

Deep breath.... and relax.... That is what this wonderful poem has granted me...

Serenity :-)

[Solidad]

"I will never bruise the wild freedom of your lovely dreams
While you lie there so tenderly in your bed
Nor will I ever break into the bright light of your day
But I will drink from the cup of your love
With these eyes instead"

I read this and the first thing that came to mind was my husband and the relationship that we have and because of that I truly LOVE this piece. I don't know who or what your muse was but be sure to thank them for me because every time I read this it reminds me of why I love my husband. :) J'adore

Very nice. Sweet write. I was leaning toward a lost love.

[LA Lorena]

Okay, I absolutely love this one!

[Arthur Henn]

And a proper muse at that - One that stirs the dreamscapes imagination with the words you write.

In the hours before the sunlight touches upon your breath - I really like this line

Eyes That Have Loved You Forever - Beautiful Title Neva

[raindroplove]

yea.....its good..

[Liza]

in my heart and eyes i see a love that remembers and longs for that feeling to be ignited - it is alive in memory - a precious capsule of a Me, I remember - a dedication to thank someone for awakening something inside...

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

I am a wandering ghost with a heart you have held forever
And always owned with your paper and pen


the attuned tune of the heart is on such alluring display in honest beauty here~

[Jvl narasimharao]

I am sorry not TOread your poetic beauties these daysEven you are not reading mine.There seems to be a communication gap-rather unbearable.
yoursJVL

[Tasha]

This was amazing Neva... simply beautiful! :)