I am a wandering ghost with eyes that have loved you forever...........
I am a wandering ghost with eyes that have loved you forever And always greeted you with the softest smile When you sleep tight my love I will gaze into your thoughts Place my shadow inside of your heart To rest for awhile
I will never bruise the wild freedom of your lovely dreams While you lie there so tenderly in your bed Nor will I ever break into the bright light of your day But I will drink from the cup of your love With these eyes instead
I am a wandering ghost with a heart you have held forever And always owned with your paper and pen If you close your eyes you can see my face in the vision You created from the shadow I left deep within
In the hours before the sunlight touches upon your breath I will slip beneath your sighs once again As the wandering ghost with eyes that loved you forever And I will dance in the shadows for you only To remember with your pen
this is a beautiful write packed with emotion that drips from the pen of the writer. It is touching and relatable not because it has been written many of times but because many people were waiting for this to be written once, great job
Wow such a deep emotional write. I liked your second to last stanza the best. I can really feel these words. Your writes makes me kind of sad really. It's wonderful you can express yourself in words.
I enjoyed this poem very much. It reminded me of one of my favorite poems. It is entitled "First Poem for You" by Kim Addonizio. Really that is all I have to say about the poem. It was truly a pleasure to read.
Deep and nice I like it! =) I get the point that it's about your spose who has since passed or even that your spose is hear and you have passed. I don't think that's how you ment it, but I'm getting that vibe for some reason. But anyawua nice work! I like it! =)
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