Eyes That Have Loved You Forever

I am a wandering ghost with eyes that have loved you forever
And always greeted you with the softest smile
When you sleep tight my love I will gaze into your thoughts
Place my shadow inside of your heart
To rest for awhile

I will never bruise the wild freedom of your lovely dreams
While you lie there so tenderly in your bed
Nor will I ever break into the bright light of your day
But I will drink from the cup of your love
With these eyes instead

I am a wandering ghost with a heart you have held forever
And always owned with your paper and pen
If you close your eyes you can see my face in the vision
You created from the shadow
I left deep within

In the hours before the sunlight touches upon your breath
I will slip beneath your sighs once again
As the wandering ghost with eyes that loved you forever
And I will dance in the shadows for you only
To remember with your pen

Author's Note

A Muse perhaps...........you decide........

Reviews

[Helen]

"When you sleep tight my love I will gaze into your thoughts
Place my shadow inside of your heart
To rest for awhile"


The pefect place to rest and to catch a moment of peace....

Deep breath.... and relax.... That is what this wonderful poem has granted me...

Serenity :-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That is a touchingly romantic poem… very very nice… it makes the hopeless romantic in me sigh.

[Bridgid Persephone Newm..]

As alway, you are beautiful inside and out Neva

[Angel Bluestocking]

"I am a wandering ghost with eyes that have loved you forever
And always greeted you with the softest smile
When you sleep tight my love I will gaze into your thoughts
Place my shadow inside of your heart
To rest for awhile"

I kept reading this part... The first that came into my mind is a Guardian Angel... :)

[Me]

Ah! Lovely! I really enjoyed this one!

[Derek S.Keck]

A muse, I know this because it sounds like my muse.

[moonbeam40]

wonderful such expression what a lovely poem I really enjoyed it thankyou Moonbeam

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The deepest, most enigmatic and most satisfying of relationships. Nicely penned, my friend. (100/100)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Sounds like the relationship I have with my Anima, Stefano.. not so much a muse, but he does bring me beautiful words sometimes. I can feel when he is with me, usually when I am dreaming.

Absolutely beautiful piece.. definitely a favorite :)

[Sara Mercury]

A muse? Try a true soul mate (or twin flame)! I loved this! It fits the relationship I have with the 'ghost' I've known since I was about four years-old. What these ghosts need to do is to recognise who they are in the physical world and then present themselves to their significant other for God's sake! lol Then we wouldn't have to have a Mr. IF (Imaginary Friend). This is so far my favourite out of all you've written thus far! A truly beautiful piece! (As far as the pic goes, I wish I had that body on me! Even at my weight of 122, I don't look that trim in the waist, and I am a size 4!!!!!)