Tiny Moments

For Tate Morgan..........one that rhymes...........

Through rain that sounds on hills of tiny moments
Somewhere beneath a faithful plea
We act out in the deepest shades of gray
As intellects passing in cascades
Of sailing ecstasy

Poets reflecting secret words which breathe in joy
Hiding our thoughts in perfect prose
Until the heavens embrace our smiling sun
And we speak in tongues
That we chose

With full cups of dreams from our imaginations
Step by step we advance on shores
Until all your thoughts rhyme in emotions
And all those tiny moments
Become yours

Author's Note

Some love the rhymes, some don't...........:)

Reviews

[Helen]

Sometimes the words are a perfect ryhme and sometimes the words are just a barely labouring stuttering prose.... But each word is perfect that comes before or after.... it depends how the author chose...

This flows like a silken waterfall over rocks smoothed by time...

I love it! You rock! Even while you roll ;-)

[Solidad]

"Poets reflecting secret words which breathe in joy
Hiding our thoughts in perfect prose
Until the heavens embrace our smiling sun
And we speak in tongues
That we chose"

I'm speechless...(which is a hard thing to do) J'adore

[LA Lorena]

Oh Neva, I really like this. I too am a rhyme lover, and I appreciate a finely crafted piece that combines meter and rhyme with meaning.

Aw this is so lovely {Such an enjoyable read} Touching!

[A]

I absolutely love this, I like the picture, it set my feelings and thoughts free, just amazing.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Another beauty. You've got mad skills.

[unknown]

Love it our moments become the worlds or at least the readers...fabulous!

[Rediscovery]

This poem really catches the thoughts and feelings of a poet, like yourself of course. And I really love how you put some rhyming in there this time. Fantastic as always!

[Joel M Frye]

Thoughts rhyming with emotions...mind and heart together sing. Apt description of your style, Neva.

[David W Moore III]

I love the first line. Rain that sounds on hills of moments. Great phrase. Wonderful tribute.