Wow this is powerful with emotions - I see myself in this writing in so many, many ways.
me thinks that when we feel we all know so well that love will not fall apart or is not extinguishable. The whole of love vaporizes into nothing right in front of our eyes. Once there, but never forgotten.
We do have to step out from the center of gravity and look at what brought us where we are today with our lives of relationships or marriages.
We have to let go of the bad and hang onto the good of our memories and move on. I may be way off from what you have written Neva, but when you write something like this that is strong with reflection that will fall upon shadows of all our lives. Each one of us will gather our own hearts interpretation of what the words of such a well written piece will represent in each of our lives.
This one makes a heart think of a lot of things - This is good writing Neva
Your poem is very nicely married ot the photo...as thoughtful as the subject appears to be...almost transient, your words find a pleasant duality that leads this reader to believe that life expressions are anything but static...always dynamic and subject to the moods of time...ever-learning and wanting a little bit more.
Excellent work...!
Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia.
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