It's the Spring and the sap is rising... and the hormones sloshing... I love the 'hint of ivory lace'... which sent me thinking of lingerie... and scents which I would not complain about...
You write with such soothing and caressing beauty... Do you do massage?
Posted 13 Years Ago
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great rhythms... the first stanza, with the accent on the second syllable, then the triplets start... i admire the technical finesse
that undergirds the soft lines.....
Ideally I would have you writing nothing but romantic and love stricken poetry. well done my darling an excellent insight into the notoriously hard to find emotion, great read.
Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia.
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