When I Kiss the Face of Love
A Poem by
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Occupying a thousand sunbeams with a hint of ivory lace............
A sense of softness speaks in momentswhen I kiss the face of love Occupying a thousand sunbeams with a hint of ivory lace I get lost in the corners of my thoughts as they rush deep inside Reflecting warmth to capture clouds so they can no longer Come near me There is a place in my heart that greets the breath of the face of love A million times I would inhale the scent with no complaint I delight in the mysteries and secrets this breath so often tells And etches within my soul lovely memories that no words Could ever take
© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Author's Note
Yes I am all mushy and romantic again today, just can't help myself........
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It's the Spring and the sap is rising... and the hormones sloshing... I love the 'hint of ivory lace'... which sent me thinking of lingerie... and scents which I would not complain about...
You write with such soothing and caressing beauty... Do you do massage?
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Lots of amazing descriptions. Great write as usual.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Lots of amazing descriptions. Great write as usual.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
world needs alittle bit more love, good job
Posted 13 Years Ago
world needs alittle bit more love, good job
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
"Mushy and romantic", but well-written. Love your wordplay and imagery. This is why I try to stay away from romance; I just can't write it like this.
Posted 13 Years Ago
"Mushy and romantic", but well-written. Love your wordplay and imagery. This is why I try to stay away from romance; I just can't write it like this.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Usually I don't go for mushy poetry, though I do consider myself a romantic at times, I really enjoyed this. Wonderful language and imagery. ~ BlackCl0ud
Posted 13 Years Ago
Usually I don't go for mushy poetry, though I do consider myself a romantic at times, I really enjoyed this. Wonderful language and imagery. ~ BlackCl0ud
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I absolutely loved the last stanza...Lovely memories that no words could ever make.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I absolutely loved the last stanza...Lovely memories that no words could ever make.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
awwwww!!!!! sooooooo *sniff* romantic!!!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
awwwww!!!!! sooooooo *sniff* romantic!!!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
It's the Spring and the sap is rising... and the hormones sloshing... I love the 'hint of ivory lace'... which sent me thinking of lingerie... and scents which I would not complain about...
You write with such soothing and caressing beauty... Do you do massage?
Posted 13 Years Ago
It's the Spring and the sap is rising... and the hormones sloshing... I love the 'hint of ivory lace'... which sent me thinking of lingerie... and scents which I would not complain about...
You write with such soothing and caressing beauty... Do you do massage?
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
well, the good news is that mushy and romantic suits you well! Another lovely gem you have here.
Posted 13 Years Ago
well, the good news is that mushy and romantic suits you well! Another lovely gem you have here.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Everyone needs to be touched at least once a day or they go mad.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Everyone needs to be touched at least once a day or they go mad.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This poem expresses what a simple touch can to do a person, and that is making us breathless :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
This poem expresses what a simple touch can to do a person, and that is making us breathless :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on April 17, 2011
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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm GA
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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia.
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