When I Kiss the Face of Love

When I Kiss the Face of Love

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Occupying a thousand sunbeams with a hint of ivory lace............

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A sense of softness speaks in moments

when I kiss the face of love
Occupying a thousand sunbeams
with a hint of ivory lace

I get lost in the corners of my thoughts
as they rush deep inside
Reflecting warmth to capture clouds
so they can no longer
Come near me

There is a place in my heart
that greets the breath
of the face of love
A million times I would inhale
the scent with no complaint

I delight in the mysteries and secrets
this breath so often tells
And etches within my soul
lovely memories that no words
Could ever take

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Yes I am all mushy and romantic again today, just can't help myself........

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It's the Spring and the sap is rising... and the hormones sloshing... I love the 'hint of ivory lace'... which sent me thinking of lingerie... and scents which I would not complain about...

You write with such soothing and caressing beauty... Do you do massage?

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Very sweet poem
So romantic
Lovely

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Yes Neva! You are mushy,and romantic,and I'm glad you can't help yourself. Because the mushiness,the Romance ,and the Passion is what makes this poem an enjoyable read.


Posted 13 Years Ago


very swet Neva...it is wonderful when the thinking makes you feel all held by sunbeams and soft lace..

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Mushy and romantic fits you like a glove Ms. Flores. I would be surprised if you anything else. thanks for sharing this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow that is a very great poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Enchanting and beautiful (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's beautiful! and romantic! so, yeah, mushy but great!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved it! the way you write has the ability to let the people reading get a glimpse of what your trying to express, and what your feeling. Keep it up!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mushy and romantic is probably my favorite style of writing, other than creepy and so powerful it gives me goosebumps. I think it's beautiful the way you have put this together, "ivory lace", "etches within my soul", "capture clouds"... wow, i like this a lot a lot a lot, keep writing, please.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Perhaps you should not try to help yourself because this is great!! :D
I especially like the line,
"I get lost in the corners of my thoughts
as they rush deep inside"
This piece was very engaging and though I had to read it over a few times, I enjoyed it! Wonderful work! :D:D:D

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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