Because

Beneath a sea which keeps the names of all that whirl in grace
Far from the pages between your face and mine
Not because I came near to this place
Do I tremble at the beauty
Here I find


On the one hand the looks of lovers call to me in fragrant rains
Whispering from a melodious harp with no strings
On the other hand, I see you in everything
And I tremble at the beauty
Which you bring


Not because of lovely flowers that float gently on the winds
Falling as the sweetest sight to joyful tears
I tremble as I watch each petal descend
Filled with beauty so like you
Yet unaware

Reviews

[Letemdangle]

I just read about particle entanglement as it refers to quantum physics today. It taught me that everything in the universe is connected by an unknown force. If you do something to one photon that is entangled with another far across the universe they react in the exact same way at the exact same time. This poem says the same to me and easier to read.

[Helen]

Because.....

"On the other hand, I see you in everything
And I tremble at the beauty
Which you bring"

Again the beauty of your words bring focus to me...

[Dream Weaver]

A delight to read as aways. Gorgeous write!

[Sukriti Suki]

I tremble at the beauty you bring, Petals descend with beauty like you unaware...magical! You have such talent that the heart melts and the mind forgets all worries even if for a tiny second..a pleasure to be able to read this.

[Sri Gawn Tu Fahr]

ummmmm.... so lovely and vibrant - I love your style.

[Aidz]

A pleasure to read and enjoy my friend :)

[WynterPhoenix]

Beautiful! One of my favorites =]

[Lily Mae]

Very beautiful Neva.. x

[brenda]

amazed its so good!!:)

[BlackCl0ud]

My favorite poem so far from toy Flores. Your words hold worlds of emotion that are extremely powerful and moving.

[Joel M Frye]

"...I see you in everything/And I tremble at the beauty/Which you bring." So simple and delicate, yet profound. There always seems to be at least one image worth taking home from every one of your writes, Neva.