Hush the Distant Roar of Darkness

I cannot hear even a whisper
when daylight stretches
into my dreamer’s sea
to hush the distant roar of darkness.

When the sun lies upon the lips
resting on all the wonder
before my eyes.

I am speechless as I find
the valley of golden roses
where sweetness
separates each breath
of beauty I inhale.

Pure joy brushes in waves
across the skies
and swirls down
upon the mountains
as I am gently held
by the hand of morning.

How could I possibly
tell the comfort
of my dreamer’s sea
that I wish for the moon
to continue shining down so free.

When I have been captured
by the beauty
that glanced my way
when daylight stretched out
his golden hand to me.

Author's Note

I love the morning............

Reviews

[Vanessa Rico]

Haha I am exactly the opposite! I am like a zombie getting out of the bed in the morning. I shuffle about to do tasks bathe, change and feed Brody and around 9 or 10 I am semi-awake. Anyway this is beautiful and captures your love for the morning! Another great write! Much love!

[lyssilou]

I like the morning, but I prefer the night. What I like about this poem is how ot captivates the essence of your love for the morning threw the poem. Great write Neva!

[Bridgid Persephone Newm..]

This could be a rock opera song!

[Robin]

golden as any sunrise ..

[Angel Bluestocking]

it's beautiful!:)

[Not Available]

I love this poem, its so beautiful ^^

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A true and relevant excessiveness in the process of one's day, a loving and spirited prose that lends itself to the greats of observational writing, well done, great read.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Love your poetry.

[Rediscovery]

Beautiful. As I love the night hours, the morning has to be just as a wonderful sight when the sun is first coming up. I can always say that the imagry in your works is phenomenal, Neva. Another great read and can't wait to see more.

[Janice Ann]

I love the morning as well! What a beautiful photo you paint with words! The last stanza...really was so beautiful! Thank you for sharing!