Dew of Quiet in the Garden

You give my soul thoughts that collide with magical lands of the moon
And follow songs with an urge to be a cloud in your sky
Rushing along unbound head over heels
With a spirit that grows
Like a flower of past times, until I long for you now
To be the dew of quiet in the gardens
Where I roam

My eyes light to meet yours again as fate melts into a substance
That penetrates the delivery of my own destiny
Then you gently take me to drink
From the ground I kiss
As if I am a bottomless sea that lives for all ages
Sent to make you know you are loved
When morning comes

You give my soul thoughts that are ever speaking as tears of joy
They are guarded by breezes in the palest moonlight
I know that when I take my last breath
Into your arms of love I will fly
To sweetly surrender my own song you discovered
As the dew of quiet in the gardens
Where I roam

Author's Note

Just me dreaming.............

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

This is ancient balladeering; obviously, predates Shakespear, by a lot.
I'd love to know, Neva, who it is you're singing to. Seems more like a god than a man.
Still, while this work appears to be purposely woven to approach concepts with a roundabout flourish, it manages to convey so very much, in an undeniably endearing way. Neva's way.

[Lily Mae]

I love your dreams and they gave me chills up and down my arms.. The second Stanza blew me away ...with thought and emotions tied up in my own dreams.. Your amazing Neva.xx

[Forest Green]

Dream-thoughts expressed flawlessly, rich in meaning and delightful to read.

Very nice poem...

Daniel

[SpokenWord]

Beautiful is your pen the scribes love so wonderfully. I enjoy all your writes.

[Jibey]

Ah... dreams indeed... kisses and gentle breezes, surrender under the moon, lost in penetration and roaming...

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Neva, I still maintain you are one of the most gifted poets. You never cease to amaze me my friend.

[LA Lorena]

Another lovely and ethereal write from your magic pen. I wonder what they must put in the water in GA that feeds your mind so. ;) Simply beautiful as always