Dew of Quiet in the Garden

You give my soul thoughts that collide with magical lands of the moon
And follow songs with an urge to be a cloud in your sky
Rushing along unbound head over heels
With a spirit that grows
Like a flower of past times, until I long for you now
To be the dew of quiet in the gardens
Where I roam

My eyes light to meet yours again as fate melts into a substance
That penetrates the delivery of my own destiny
Then you gently take me to drink
From the ground I kiss
As if I am a bottomless sea that lives for all ages
Sent to make you know you are loved
When morning comes

You give my soul thoughts that are ever speaking as tears of joy
They are guarded by breezes in the palest moonlight
I know that when I take my last breath
Into your arms of love I will fly
To sweetly surrender my own song you discovered
As the dew of quiet in the gardens
Where I roam

Author's Note

Just me dreaming.............

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

This is ancient balladeering; obviously, predates Shakespear, by a lot.
I'd love to know, Neva, who it is you're singing to. Seems more like a god than a man.
Still, while this work appears to be purposely woven to approach concepts with a roundabout flourish, it manages to convey so very much, in an undeniably endearing way. Neva's way.

[unknown]

There's the dew I've been waiting to hear about lol, As usual beautiful words have been caught in the dew. Wonderful poem :)

[Skateprincess]

Another lovely and whimsical piece always a pleasure to read your work :)

[Letemdangle]

I can totally sense the dreamlike state here. Like many of my dreams I can make sense of them at some spiritual level, but articulation is not available. It's funny, the more I try to explain, the less it makes sense.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Neva, this is so gentle and soothing ... just beautiful.
Your dreams are beautiful and the first line
"You give my soul thoughts that collide with magical lands of the moon"- it is wonderful... love this poem ...

Chloe

[Hayley]

Breath-taking.

[Aidz]

Another good one

[Ladysue]

Gorgeous...dreamy and so beautiful expressed as always...much enjoyed...

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this is sooooooooo beautiful! i feel bad cause i run out of ways to review your poetry... i just can't think of different ways to express the beauty of your writing!!!

[Vanessa Rico]

I agree 100% with LA Lorena! Your poems always take me to a magical place!