Ribbons of Curiously Spinning Tales

Ribbons of Curiously Spinning Tales

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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The heart of the sky melts into bowls................

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Morning rises in such extraordinary ways; touching on what is real
When you have been spinning round in fairy tales
Where stars are silver haired ladies whose souls have awakened
The smile carried deep in the pockets of mist filled clouds
Revealing an upside moon unveiled

North winds created doorways radiating single rays of light
That changed the stories old familiar taste
Within dreams a new flame burns on the rosy cheeks
Whose ears are now bent down to hear music
A sleeping soul will make

The heart of the sky melts into bowls; fills them to their brims
Full of sweet thoughts to save for a rainy day
Unlike the ones you read in those books you treasure
They dwell inside your heart softly listening
For you to come and play

Tangled up in fantastic ribbons of curiously spinning tales
One's imagination can escape innocently
Into places where everything flows purely fantastic
To carry on with them when morning rises
To touch upon their reality

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
I like to chase fireflies.............

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We use to catch them as children but I wont ever tell you what we did with them after we captured them. The heart of a child is pure but their minds are wicked beyond belief. I wish I could remember more of my dreams. Someone once told me that when we dream it is actually our souls leaving our bodies and going on an adventure in the universe and we see it or remember in the form of a dream when we wake. A beautiful thought to me for many reasons. Beautiful write like your other works and other great pictures that you find for your poetry.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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simpler times indeed. this sounds like fond childhood memories, vividly recalled.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I love it =]

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Stunning piece I especially love I too remember catching them
Your poem took me back to childhood
Your words paint a beautiful canvas of
The universe and natures beauty
And a beautiful vividness
The flow the imagery
Absolutely Beautiful!!


Posted 13 Years Ago


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so entrancing, beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We use to catch them as children but I wont ever tell you what we did with them after we captured them. The heart of a child is pure but their minds are wicked beyond belief. I wish I could remember more of my dreams. Someone once told me that when we dream it is actually our souls leaving our bodies and going on an adventure in the universe and we see it or remember in the form of a dream when we wake. A beautiful thought to me for many reasons. Beautiful write like your other works and other great pictures that you find for your poetry.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A whimsical wonderful write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I love your writing. There's such purity and beauty in it, along with a a universal spirituality that touches anyone's heart, who is lucky enough to read your words. Awesome!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I find I have to let go of my preconceived notions about my reality to fully enjoy your writing. Reading your poetry is a great way to dance around inside my head.

Posted 13 Years Ago


your right I do like this best it is sweet

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This poem really made me smile and think of summer nights. I loved that this poem took me to a beautiful, happy place that I remember that I played in when I was a child. Love it! Another awesome poem!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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