You said you could climb the peaks of life to awaken pain..............
You said you could climb the peaks of life to awaken pain Even as flashes of madness called you their own Understandably, I still loved your careless flaming heart With a watchful face which recalls taking hold Of your broken chains
You told me the sky hurled heroes upon your summons Though I know, you still claimed visions shared So I came and went until you were pleased to let me Sing the tune of the tongues of angels To your warrior heart
Beyond the start of centuries stroking cloudy shores Better than a silent idea you let be sought Lies the voice of courage clinging to those ideals You sustained when you named fear As no such thing
But you never told me that sometimes it rains on love Or how often you hide when it comes a flood So when the quiet came I thought you didn’t care I decided to climb the peaks of life myself To sing pain back to sleep
Oh, Neva...the clarity of your singing here is superb! This may become my favorite of what I have read of yours. The consistency of vision from start to finish, the impeccable images...this write caught me completely in its grip. Thank you for sharing your gift of this poem.
Hello. "To sing pain back to sleep", that really resonates with me and I think is such a beautiful line. As a whole, I quite like this poem, it has a nice melodious structure. Thank you for sharing it.
Awwwwww. I loved this. It's so sweet and true and bwaaa! I just love it! It confuses me, the usage and places of the words, but I loved it all the same! Amazing!
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