The Silhouette Never Fades

Open your care for an ounce of what should be
Until the trail reaches to nothing more
Than a word said of proof that comes back
To what is fair and should have  
Been before

There are rare pictures that bring us to long ago
Inside of a warm forever meant to last
Gathering dreams in heaven that is woven
To cover what has been left undone
In our past

Our melody never loses that which lies in between
Closing our eyes and spilling our shade
That which is precious has no need of direction
As its silhouette was never meant
To ever fade

Even though the seasons confess we lose vision
The same weather stays in our sight
As we yearn to once again hear the melody
Singing proof of what should be
In our life

Author's Note

I believe that we have lived many lives before. I also believe that what is unfinished we will try to complete or attain in the lives we live now. Especially in the area of the heart...

Reviews

[Jibey]

I don't believe in the many lives theory but I do believe we wrap up in our brains many experiences which float up to our consciousness as time passes and that maybe we take in something of long ago trhough our family connexions... The romantic dreaminess of this writing has a pleasing, soothing, musical quality - like that southern drawl lol

[Robin]

an open mind , an open heart , I hear the melody within your words ~

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a beautiful poem. It's like a portal that allowed me to slip in and out
of time. I enjoyed this work of art.

[Stammers]

'Closing our eyes and spilling our shade' - I like your way of saying things, can be quite unique.

[Dream Weaver]

Some things are truly better left unsaid and undone, but not in this piece.
A wonderful interpretation of the human spirit at its best. beautifully put.

[Lilly Negoi]

wow...
"Even though the seasons confess we lose vision
The same weather stays in our sight"
such truths you convey...

[Aidz]

Excellent write Neva.... I listen for that melody ;)

[Nothing Personal]

A profound poem..The agelessness of seasons, contrasting to our limited times..makes time eternal as we are stuck in the same moments as we were thousands of before..I am amazed by its message !!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

The journey we make through Eternity takes us to different stories we have already lived and yet to be told. Beautiful poem

[Lily Mae]

All of the lives before have made this soul journey just what its mean't to be.. I love this and as always you make my heart happy...xx