Remember

Touch my heart in the shadows of the night
Let silence reign in your seduction
Call to my eyes until I can remember
Words of love you once spoke
Dear to me

Let there be no shame in what we see here
In this warmth you bring to me
Call to my eyes that I am not alone
Words of love you once spoke
So willingly

I am standing still with the print of your heart
Here listening to the beat of my own
Call to my eyes the words of love known
So that I can remember
My way home

Reviews

[The Analog Kid]

The rhymes are woven beautifully here. Really reaching back to when love was within grasp. Nice ending.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

thank you. Did not mean for you to review this.........just wanted you to see the idea. Thank you so much though:) XX

[The Analog Kid]

NP...I was happy to do so:) Loved it and the style!

[Samuel Dickens]

Since you clued me in, I can understand exactly what this is about. I wonder; do we sometimes sense our one true love-- the one we knew on another plane or are yet to meet?

[Sukriti Suki]

these words will resonate in my heart for a long time to come ' words of love you once spoke so willingly'....Respect!

[FJ Davis]

Pretty pastel art--both. Hand-over-heart salute to the queen of this website.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

The last line is a heart breaker.
It is soft and gentle longing .. beautiful, Neva.

Chloe

[Jibey]

Warm, tender and so very winning in its appeal..

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Very beautiful, written for the beat a special heart of a lucky man.