Sweetest Wish

Let the touch of my irresistible waves dance upon your skin
Imagine you are the North Star in my sky
Take hold of desire, as we feel our future begin
By dawn, life will glimmer alone
In our eyes

Make one sweet wish to rise in the golden light of day
Then you can see your wish come true
For one moment the outside world will drift away
We will find ourselves in the light of dawn
Life shimmering anew

I will let the touch of your irresistible waves dance upon my skin
Imagine I am all the words to your song
Take hold of desire, as we feel our future rolling in
By dawn, life will glimmer in our eyes
Burning strong

I will speak to you of fleeting hours, we will while away
Dancing to the music which is our own
For just one moment the outside world will survey
The sweetest wish as it rises
To be known

Reviews

[Jeremy Wyatt]

Neva we are so blessed in this world Water, sky and the light of the sun, so many wonderful poems to write with those amazing things..I do send wee wishes out now as well, tiny little selfish ones.
This poem makes me feel so glad to be alive X

[Arabdha]

mesmerisingly tantalizing..this is it..perfect ! if rating were an option i would put a 100/100..but its a good thing you have deactivated it..there is no rating perfection !!

[SpokenWord]

Yes this is a lovely write that expresses how two can complete each other by being everything to each other. Oneness.

[Judy Ponceby]

This is so lovely Neva. Exquisitely written. :)

[Hayley]

It is like you are pondering as you are writing this. I like the metaphor of "irresistible waves" dancing upon skin. A lovely write, thank you.

[LA Lorena]

This is not only a poem, but a feeling, and IMO, that is how it should be. The flow and rythym here is divine, as is the descriptive imagery. A first class read!

[Dream Weaver]

Such beautiful imagery, I was swept away with each elegant stanza!
sweet write.....

[Lily Mae]

A great poem to read by the ocean with a heart open and wishing for answers..or hoping the dream taps her on her shoulders;) I love this Neva xx

[Phill Oz O'fee]

How do I interpret your wonderfully expressive composition? Like this...

‘Poetically embracing mutual desires and delights; with assonance melodies of oneness.’

Thanks for the invite to read – it was well worth it!
Phillip

[Jibey]

A poem of delight and desire... irresistible indeed... It speaks with tender warmth of the pleasures of the night, of the joy of two who are drawn together in the magic touches of love...