Sweetest Wish

Let the touch of my irresistible waves dance upon your skin
Imagine you are the North Star in my sky
Take hold of desire, as we feel our future begin
By dawn, life will glimmer alone
In our eyes

Make one sweet wish to rise in the golden light of day
Then you can see your wish come true
For one moment the outside world will drift away
We will find ourselves in the light of dawn
Life shimmering anew

I will let the touch of your irresistible waves dance upon my skin
Imagine I am all the words to your song
Take hold of desire, as we feel our future rolling in
By dawn, life will glimmer in our eyes
Burning strong

I will speak to you of fleeting hours, we will while away
Dancing to the music which is our own
For just one moment the outside world will survey
The sweetest wish as it rises
To be known

Reviews

Excellent poem. Soft spoken sentiments whispered in the dark, longing for the new day, the next meeting.

[al25]

This is really well written. I like how you refer to the waves.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Poetry is art and so is this; I mean I can’t even find the words to describe it other than Awesome!

[Joel M Frye]

Such a tenderness in the words, a gentle vision of love and togetherness, Neva. Well done.

[Ladysue]

This is impressive work...it flows with sensuality...this is so beautifully written...it touched me...

[Sukriti Suki]

it leaves you with a very sweet feeling...an excellent way to portray true sensuality...wonderful.

[unknown]

A wonderful way for the sweetish wish to unveil.

[Art Sun]

you write these poems with a depth that expresses the very core of love, romance, and that experience of sensuality...and with passion that one must know of...nicely written Neva....

[Ravyne Hawke]

What a beautiful, sensual and tantilizing poem, Neva. You never cease to amaze me with the beauty of your style.

[FJ Davis]

Almost like being present at the foundation of a new world. Adam and Neva.
Stunning imagery and metaphor! Another triumph, Queen Neva.