Silent Rain Sighing in My Sleep

You are the silent rain I feel sighing in my sleep
In silence I trust this land of ease
This song you play for me quiet though it be
Is held dear in all its beauty
In perfect peace

I remember winds with kindness like pretty pictures
Yet I recall the hour they pulled me close
They left me with such sorrow that I can tell you
When I am lonely is when I remember
Them the most

You sit beside me and I behold beauty as I sleep
Protected always in your silent rain
This song you play for me quiet though it be
Has returned my trust in love
My peace regained

When my air is silent you are the veil of pleasure
That wraps song around my soul
And though quiet may be the sweetest
Silent sound my land of ease
Has ever known

Reviews

[Tommy]

I love this Z, the expression of the silent rain, or an inner storm. Wow! You know this made me think about how comforting a summer thunder storm is as it rages outside, I seem to sleep really peaceful this noise. I compare this to your piece, because when we are a sleep the storm may feel so peaceful, kind of like living in memoires, with hopes of a past long gone the present of reality, but when we are awake it shakes the comforts of our houses, or our thoughts...

Great Write Man!
RLG,
Tommy

[Ravyne Hawke]

Such a beautiful poem.. I love your imagery, the way you represent rain as a spiritual entity. Beautifully written, my friend.

[SpokenWord]

Silence is an art that eluded me for many years until someone told me that if I can sit in silence with someone for hours on end and still feel joy being around them then they are a true friend. I am not totally sure what quiet rain represents but knowing your work it is based in spirit over anything else. I think this poem is beautiful.

[Liza]

you speak of elements that are not visible to the human eye yet we feel its existence and need it every day - very sensual and soulful expression

[CalebSchadeck]

beautiful very vivid descriptions it realy paints the picture you are trying to covey, the picutre of love as I saw it you did a nice job putting emotions into this piece very nice!

[fargone]

ur work is unfailingly beautiful, neva. this is no exception. the peace of silent love is a wonderful concept. love that lasts isn't always built around mad passion, which often burns out too soon.

[Antonio Valentino]

I've written about the beauty of silence my self, I love it, and this poem did it true justice in its appreciation of peace, and tranquility.

Lovely Neva.

[Judy Ponceby]

Lovely Neva, I was feeling a bit melancholy and this lifted my spirits a bit. Thank you for sharing.

[Tasha]

This was very lovely Neva, and I absoultely loved the title... outstanding job.

[FJ Davis]

Though greatly missed, they are always there; able to touch us only when we stop running.
Lovely, Neva.