Among the Towering Trees

Among the Towering Trees

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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As I see, I love you written on a canvas among the towering trees...........

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As I see, I love you written on a canvas among the towering trees

I will always remember looking into your eyes
All around me, I feel your touch without a single sound
As if, your fingers trace a trail among the trees
Where you wrote I love you in the sky

I stand waiting for the words to begin to fade into the sky
For my happiness to leave upon a breeze
Each time I look at this canvas, anew I see I love you
Becoming one the same as you and I
Among the towering trees

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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Amazing.... you have such an unique way with words, I enjoy reading your poetry!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There's a certain sweet elegance to this piece.
Soft and endearing....

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is so passionate and lovely..speaks of an epic romance..timeless and perfect..100/100..adding it to my library..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this has a cyclic feeling about it - making me think about "what goes around comes around" - and what more beautiful boomerang effect than that of such a complete and undying love?! time is no match for the absolute feeling...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely poetry Neva .. I think we are all connected and with Nature too .. this is a little melancholy to me .. soft and gentle filled with love.

Chloe

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

GA



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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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