Drowning the Sadness of Silent Tears

Drowning the Sadness of Silent Tears

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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You have to feel something if only for a second.............

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If you listened to silent tears, would you know what caused them
When sweet arms send a bewitching sadness in
You can hear the rhythm crying out in their silver stream
When they come to offer up a cleansing tribute
To drown the sadness that remains

Coming after tears are cards which reveal all those silent twists
Received by the body from a sun burning bright
It is only in your mind that you have been stripped bare
As you have to feel something if only for a second
To turn the twists and make it right

Soon a complete tune you used to know has drifted out to sea
Still you seem to hear it whispering hello
You do not have to take notes it is not hard to recall
When destiny’s door has been left slightly ajar
On those words you already know

When you behold the embers from the kiss of unexpected tears
Do not let the glorious light of your essence despair
You can hear a rhythm crying out a cleansing “This I know”
Go ahead and feel something if only for a second
To drown the sadness from your air


© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
I have absolutely no idea what this is about, just what came out of my head this morning.......

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For me it gives me a sense of release...a time to bow to the past.. To cleanse, so moving forward will be without past obstacles. First you must "drown the sadness from your air". Perfectly written and a divine write to have just been floating in your head today.. ;) x

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I do knowsw what its about it is about unrequited love the song that bespeaks the lost memories of a love devine beautiful

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow. you really think like that, do you? haha it just came out of your head....well it's amazing. it's very beautiful and vivid. i loved it! you inspire me

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If this is you writing straight from the head then your talent is outstanding. I actual relate to this, crying silent tears from the inside.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Are you sure you're not a Pixie? This is very magical :o)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

For me it gives me a sense of release...a time to bow to the past.. To cleanse, so moving forward will be without past obstacles. First you must "drown the sadness from your air". Perfectly written and a divine write to have just been floating in your head today.. ;) x

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 12, 2011
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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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