A Wilderness of Freedom

Slide your feelings into mine, under the fire I breathe

Embracing all the highs and lows, you behold

Keep me safe and warm from the winds that blow

Around moments when this heart forgets

You are a gift much too precious

To ever let go

Allow the wilderness of your soul to run with mine

Loving the taste of our own freedom

Upon life's stage, we will explore our inner depths

Together collecting pieces to fill spaces

On the elusive silver screen

Of knowing wisdom

Come return kisses of light from a passionate moon

With the radiance of our hearts' desire

Slide your feelings into mine, my precious gift

Hold me when the winds come knocking

To take the eternal flame I breathe

From my air's fire

Slide your feelings into mine, here together endlessly

Embracing the differences, we behold

With an understanding, that keeps both our hearts

Ever mindful that our love is a precious gift

Running in a wilderness of freedom

Within our souls

Reviews

[Jibey]

Such a wonderful thought - of sliding into another - when two souls embrace in warmth and comfort, forgetting the hardship of the wilderness and loving only its freedom, looking for the bright opportunities to grow and learn together... Your writing has a rare quality of emotional depth and imaginative control... A beautiful piece

[Amberlight]

. . . this is epic romantic poetic words. Those sentiments have all been used a million times but yours is unique enough to be heard a million times. Fave line: "Come return kisses of light from a passionate moon"
Love the formatting - not easy to do and still write beautiful words.

[Steve]

This almost made me blush! :0) I guess I was reading too much into it? What does that say about me? :0)

I really like how you weave your writes. You seem to have an effortlessness to your style.

[highthought]

very few writers can talk about souls

[LA Lorena]

Neva, this is simply lovely. I love the line 'slide your feelings', it says so much, and the third stanza is divine. Nicely done.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Passions burning deep, another winner my friend

[fargone]

beautiful as ever, neva. love is definitely ur realm of expression. excellent :)

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Beautiful to want to be so close to a love you feel their every feeling good or bad.
I enjoyed this and would say more but am half asleep!
You are a very good writer.. I read you once last summer or sometime ago..
Glad you are here.

Chloe

[David Sjolander]

This is beautiful, as always, Neva! Keep writing!:))

David