Surrounding My Everything

Surrounding My Everything

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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How can I ever close my eyes to you...........

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How can I ever close my eyes to you when your face haunts me

Blowing like scattered leaves across my mind
I become breathless and can hear you speak my name
In those whispers, I hear springing to life
Declaring, “You are mine”

If my heart could only speak, it would tell of the first moment
When you wrapped your heart around my soul
How you painted your love into all of my loneliest spaces
With words that embraced and bonded my faith
That love again, I could hold

I can see you softly smiling from this chair where I sit alone
Your love washes over me in gracious springs
How can I close my eyes to you when your face is here
Whispering those words that I know are true
Surrounding my everything

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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profoundly sad indeed but somehow hopeful.
"If my heart could only speak, it would tell of the first moment
When you wrapped your heart around my soul
How you painted your love into all of my loneliest spaces
With words that embraced and bonded my faith" -is my favorite part.


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This is really pretty and soothing. Good job with making it get your point across.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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a beautiful write full of a rare love. wonderful neva :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Silent as a whisper, soft as cottony clouds every word a small
reminder of a love tightly embraced...Well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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