Your memorized replies haunt all of these hallowed spaces
Winding profusely around the precious truth
Dispersing beads of splendor into the sweetest memories
That I will always have and hold of you
The ink will never ever fade, or vanish from these pages
Which hold the words, deeply written in my soul
Engraved in these hallowed spaces of the precious truth
Completing, the other half of the whole
Glowing gifts of revelations sweetly haunt my memories
With the spirit of the Muse you put in place
As I respond to your replies in the crystal ink of my tears
With a smile of blissful joy upon my face
No matter where I roam or where this life may take me
These engravings are etched into my heart
Memorized in spaces, of the tracks of my tears of joy
Never from my spirit to depart
Your imagery never fails to stun me. You use such soft words to paint unforgettable golden images. If I had to nitpick on this write, I would say "truth" and "you" do not rhyme comfortably. But that apart, I think this is a great poem, written with splendor, and a sense of longing.
You are one of my favorite poets on the Cafe! Great job once again.
Nice work...we are but the imagery of our own thoughts...as we lay out those poetic expressions to be exposed within the eyes and minds of others, we are left but to absorb those responses...
Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia.
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