Memorized In Spaces

A tribute to my Muse............

Your memorized replies haunt all of these hallowed spaces
Winding profusely around the precious truth
Dispersing beads of splendor into the sweetest memories
That I will always have and hold of you

The ink will never ever fade, or vanish from these pages
Which hold the words, deeply written in my soul
Engraved in these hallowed spaces of the precious truth
Completing, the other half of the whole

Glowing gifts of revelations sweetly haunt my memories
With the spirit of the Muse you put in place
As I respond to your replies in the crystal ink of my tears
With a smile of blissful joy upon my face

No matter where I roam or where this life may take me
These engravings are etched into my heart
Memorized in spaces, of the tracks of my tears of joy
Never from my spirit to depart

 

Author's Note

For My Heart.......

Reviews

[Abdul Aziz]

Your imagery never fails to stun me. You use such soft words to paint unforgettable golden images. If I had to nitpick on this write, I would say "truth" and "you" do not rhyme comfortably. But that apart, I think this is a great poem, written with splendor, and a sense of longing.
You are one of my favorite poets on the Cafe! Great job once again.

[Mauricio Montoya]

great choice of words, excellent write.

[Edgar A Stonehill]

Complicated and enjoyable phrasing.

[floarealbastra10]

wonderful writing

[Marlena]

Muse tributes are always cute and kind of interesting, to see what the author thinks. Nice work, I like the repetition. :)

[Antonio Valentino]

She's a beautiful friend isn't she?

What would we do without her, our sweet muse?
This was wonderful.

Antonio :)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

sorrow in your weaving is like velvet~ beautifully drawn even in its soft pain there is such beauty palpable through your poetic symphony~

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

So beautiful, Neva. Soft and lovely.

Chloe

[Color Me Gone]

We take many loves with us in those memories don't we? An extremely relatable piece Neva~

[Gomer LePoet]

Another wonderfully written piece Neva. This is what true poetry is all about.
the words just flow off the page like a gentle breeze, with the sound of a stream in the background and the smell of flowers lingering in the air.

[Cheyenne]

I love this. its a very good poem i think i like it better than the other one of yours i read though i love them.