Moon Dancing In Your Hands

Exquisite chains of unseen hours
All lie in fantasies
In countless dreams of unbloomed flowers
Moon dancing in your sea

Petals soft on beds of sand
Tremble at your touch
As their spirits are awakened by the hand
Of love's own velvet brush

Soulful cries of blissful glee
Echo to the moon
Resounding from the heart's own sea
Left enamored by the bloom

Beauty sweet and triumph slow
Swirling in the sand
Painting strokes of blooming glow
Moon dancing in your hands

Reviews

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

It's so funny. The words wash ashore and then pull away. I read again, and it's the same. There is such a sense of familiarity between the stanzas, almost as if there is repetition. This is not the case, however. It's just a cascade of poetic petals than transcend the screen. Your poem is ethereal, transcendent, and just plain magical.

Linda Marie Van Tassell

[Fabian G. Franklin]

"Can I just have one more moondance with you, my love?" Van Morrison

This was lovely.

[Jibey]

I think I understand the beautiful esperience that this describes...turning it into midnight magic, when the spirits of love are abroad...

[fargone]

beautiful! i know its become a familiar refrain but, it simply is beautiful. great write, neva.

[Cerebriation]

Wow, what visions. I love this one! You have a certain way with words. I'm not much for traditional poetry, because most of it is trying to impress with big words and flowered meanings, and I think it really dilutes the writings, but this is unique. Keep it going. This is great!

[Moflo]

This was well written, very simple but the rhymes are perfect and the feeling of ecstasy sticks out. Vivid imagery well described. Good write!

[Lily Mae]

Moon dancing in your hands...ahhh my favorite for sure.. xxx

[Mauricio Montoya]

Visual communication, I’ve always say poetry is an art and here you’ve done just that.
Excellent write.

[Awdures]

I love the delicate rhyming scheme you used in this poem. It seems sometimes to be a dance bordering on the erotic. But perhaps that's my take on the lines.

The beauty here is unmistakable. Well done.

[OkieWonKenokie]

Beautiful. I love this poem. The rhythm and flow of this piece is splendid. Great Job.

[c.m.]

I love this write...it flows nicely, and it paints a lovely picture. Great work.