Moon Dancing In Your Hands

Exquisite chains of unseen hours
All lie in fantasies
In countless dreams of unbloomed flowers
Moon dancing in your sea

Petals soft on beds of sand
Tremble at your touch
As their spirits are awakened by the hand
Of love's own velvet brush

Soulful cries of blissful glee
Echo to the moon
Resounding from the heart's own sea
Left enamored by the bloom

Beauty sweet and triumph slow
Swirling in the sand
Painting strokes of blooming glow
Moon dancing in your hands

Reviews

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

It's so funny. The words wash ashore and then pull away. I read again, and it's the same. There is such a sense of familiarity between the stanzas, almost as if there is repetition. This is not the case, however. It's just a cascade of poetic petals than transcend the screen. Your poem is ethereal, transcendent, and just plain magical.

Linda Marie Van Tassell

[David W Moore III]

the first image was a grand vision. The moon dancing in your sea. It brought a picture to my mind of the moons reflection gently bobbing in the waves, then add the your to it and it becomes something much more complex. and of course the end with the moon dancing in your hands, fantastic. Almost like a goddess, playing with her creation.

[Ladysue]

wow, this is exquisite writing...such beautiful images that are so full of heart and soul and make the reader feel the breathtaking beauty of it all. that first stanza is excellent...wonderfully poetic...

[Adora.xo]

That was absolutely breath-taking. Exquisite to say the least!

~Adora

[FJ Davis]

One of your greatest gifts is unerring taste. Difficult to believe that you could have cultivated such a superlative talent in one very short lifetime.
Your style is primitive-futuristic--with an influence of stylized barbarian.
This poem? Strangely stimulating--and, as always, exotically beautiful.

[Hello, Goodbye]

Flowtiful imagery with a curious captivating resonance..

[Forest Green]

Lunar visions, moonlight filling brushstrokes; your poem finds the fine moments of anticipation and portrays them nicely.

Nice work...

[Jeremy Wyatt]

Such a gentle piece, Neva it is beyond beautiful X

[Derek S.Keck]

Everything you write could belong to any age or any time. You take your poetry right from that centered unmovable spot in the human heart. Timeless!

[Arabdha]

your poems belong in the category of timeless classic romances..they speak to me and soothe my soul..you're one of my favorite writers here :)

[Maggie]

A fantasy-like world of turning, dancing romance...a beach I'm reminded of