Dancing Butterflies

Dancing Butterflies

The sweet elusive fragrance of dancing butterflies
Flows gently from the corners of my memory
Mellow and entrancing as the softest sighs
Heard from a whispered cry of glee

I am captured by the aroma in such sweet ecstasy
That plays upon my senses so divine
A lovely, flowing feeling illuminates within me
As if, I have breathed in another time

I have escaped to another time, another place
Where I now dance delicately and free
You can smell the sweet elusive fragrance
Flowing gently from my wings
Breathe in and you can dance with me

Reviews

[Gionelly Kiss]

I felt entranced. Such powerful work here. Perfect use of poetic technique particularly the repetition of "s" sound, captivates the mood and pulls the reader into peace and tranquility, producing a dreamy state. Thanks for that beautiful poetry. Could you please share your inspiration so that we may learn? Just beautiful. Again thanks for sharing. Please, keep writing.
Gionelly*KiSS

[Iota]

That is the beautiful thing about scent is that it can trigger some of the most detailed memories. sharing a scent with someone and taking a little mental journey with them should form a nice memory for the future. I love the ending of this poem how if someone sniffs your scent they can dance with you. Nice touch....

True so many views and so little reviews that is odd......

[la Abeja]

Bravo!
This piece is both delicate and powerful.
Well done.

StacieJ

[Abdul Aziz]

132 views, and no review?!

This is a beautiful write, written with elegance. I love the way you achieve such softness in your write, and I guess abab really helps in that regard.

No complaints!