Wandering Soul

Wandering Soul

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

 The shifting sands beneath my feet caress my wandering soul
Inciting in me the urge to roam and stray
Each grain invokes a message that whispers to my feet
Enticing me to visit untried places faraway

The warmest breezes brush my face and motivate me onward
To explore this world and see what I can find
 Persuading me to listen as they sing into my senses
That just to stay here in this place, will keep me confined

I look up into the bluest skies and see a soaring eagle
And listen as I hear him bravely calling out to me
To follow in his path and look out through his eyes
Inviting me to fly so high and free

In these shifting sands of life I wander through each day
Taking step by step, come what may
I pray to always be motivated to explore untried spaces
And that my heart will never be lead astray


© 2010 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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I think this was lovely,flowing like the shimmering blue waves...it does capture the essence of a wandering soul which seeks to unravel mysteries of the world unknown..
I have one suggestion,all your lines begin with a word which begins with a capital letter and there is no use of punctuation marks...this kind of jars the continuity...that kept apart,the theme was beautiful..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I think this was lovely,flowing like the shimmering blue waves...it does capture the essence of a wandering soul which seeks to unravel mysteries of the world unknown..
I have one suggestion,all your lines begin with a word which begins with a capital letter and there is no use of punctuation marks...this kind of jars the continuity...that kept apart,the theme was beautiful..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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