Never To Be Defined

words of love eternal............

Collected skeins of unraveled words drift along in space
Existing in the complexity of time
Bits and pieces of exchanges between two hearts
Containing the mysteries of their rhyme

Sweetness held in close regard never to be revealed
Lies waiting between each and every line
Of the secrets that the words themselves contain
Safely locked away to never be defined

Time will ever hold these words in its warm embrace
As a divine reminder of a love so true
A legacy to only be unraveled by two loving hearts
Exchanging words of love the way we do

These skeins of unraveled words exist here in this time
Complex and yet so simple in their truth
Rhyme, reason, or their secrets, are not to be defined
Until read, by two hearts in love so true

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i have tried in many ways to convey what you have achieved here, you method of expression is exquisite and borders on heavenly in its translation. for the first time, i have witnessed, in verse, what it truly feels like to experience that rare and unspoken love between two kindred souls. this is beautiful... i am very deeply and profoundly touched by this piece. i only ache to know a love so true as what you have defined here...it must truly be a blessing

[Corset]

Neva, this is really beautiful, isn't it funny how the same words being spoken been two different women could have so much of an impact on the person hearing them depending on emotional depth of the person hearing the for the person saying them?

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The language and easy flow of this to the reader... guides down the page... Yet, in the end... tells all... Thanks for sharing... Good day!

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you :)

[Stonewall]

Wonderful, thought provoking and very well crafted. It makes me think of language within language, the way certain phrases mean particular things to two particular people in love, or even the way teenagers like to subvert language, and so on. I think maybe love itself is also a language, or rather a key for unlocking layers of communication. So many songs and books and films tell me so much more, having been in love.