You in Yourself

You in Yourself

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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You in yourself treasure your secrets...............

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You in yourself,

treasure your secrets

inside a trance,

as your greatest work of art.

You lay them down  

as your reality

among the colorful leaves

then let them lie….

to your heart.

 

I simply wait

as your diamond

for you to turn the pages

of my body

while you sing.

I’m left dreaming of your smile

within a roaring tide

believing your time….

is everything.

 

 

 

 

© 2014 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Copyright @2014 - Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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"You in Yourself" is a great title for this poem.

"among the colorful leaves
then let them lie….
to your heart."

I like the possible pun on the word "lie" here. Wonderful poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


"I’m left dreaming of your smile
within a roaring tide"

Beautiful and valuable as finding new treasures. We should believe in ourselves and our time indeed. Excellent...:).........

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lay them down as your reality among the colorful leaves.......................my favorite part. Good poem. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Neva you write so beautifully. This is uplifting and inspired.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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