You in Yourself

You in Yourself

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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You in yourself treasure your secrets...............

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You in yourself,

treasure your secrets

inside a trance,

as your greatest work of art.

You lay them down  

as your reality

among the colorful leaves

then let them lie….

to your heart.

 

I simply wait

as your diamond

for you to turn the pages

of my body

while you sing.

I’m left dreaming of your smile

within a roaring tide

believing your time….

is everything.

 

 

 

 

© 2014 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Copyright @2014 - Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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"You in Yourself" is a great title for this poem.

"among the colorful leaves
then let them lie….
to your heart."

I like the possible pun on the word "lie" here. Wonderful poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


"I’m left dreaming of your smile
within a roaring tide"

Beautiful and valuable as finding new treasures. We should believe in ourselves and our time indeed. Excellent...:).........

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lay them down as your reality among the colorful leaves.......................my favorite part. Good poem. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Neva you write so beautifully. This is uplifting and inspired.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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